The Carriers; Part Five

Alan Miles stretched out on the bench outside Base Command and let the afternoon sun warm his body. His lunch hour was just about up and the thought of going back inside sucked the life right out of him. His head hurt. He’d read report after report from the American’s about these ‘non-terrestrial objects’. Almost two dozen so far and had just about had his fill of cryptic content.

“Thought I’d find you out here.” Captain Marcus Miles strolled over to the bench and sat down. “Nothing like some fresh air to clear the mind.”

Alan snorted, looking up at his older brother. “Then why isn’t it working?”

Marcus sat back. “How the hell should I know?” He leaned forward and rested his elbows on his knees. “What the hell is going on?”

“What d’ya mean?”

“You know what I mean.”

“The reports from Washington?”

“Yeah. What the hell’s going on down there? Who teaches these guys to be so cryptic? “

Alan didn’t reply.

Marcus ran his fingers through his short hair. “I mean, ‘un-natural formation’? Is that their way of saying man-made?”

“I guess so. It allows them to suggest that maybe these meteorites aren’t what they appear to be.”

Marcus straightened up. “Yeah and stating they’re manufactured is one step below implying it was a direct attack by terrorists.”

“No one’s said anything about terrorists.”

“Not yet.”

“Look, can we talk about something else?”

Marcus nodded. “You and Mellissa still coming over for supper tonight?”

“Yeah, I guess. It’ll be good to do something other than listen to those damn news reports.”

“That bad?”

Alan snorted. “Melissa does nothing but watch CBC and CNN all day.” He shifted his position on the bench. “Do you know how much of that sani-gel we have? There are bottles of the stuff all over the apartment. I can’t touch her unless I’ve covered my hands in that crap.”

Marcus chuckled. “That’s a bit over-board.”

“Over-board isn’t the word I’d use.”

“To be honest, I can’t blame her. Look at how many are out on sick leave, and half the people in the village is sick.”

A grim look came over Alan. “Any dead?”

Marcus nodded. “Some of the older folks.” He looked at his brother. “What about here in the city?”

Alan shrugged. “A few of my neighbours are sick, but that’s about it, but then I don’t know everyone around me. Could be more.”

“Davy’s best friend is sick.”

“Is Davy okay?”

“Louise has been keeping an eye on him. So far he seems healthy.”

“Don’t worry. He’s a strong kid.” Alan playfully punched his older brother. “Takes after his uncle.”

 

***

 

The apartment building was quiet as Alan unlocked the glass front door. The smell of rotting garbage filled the lobby as a waste can overflowing with garbage sat in the corner of the room. Alan swore softly and walked toward the first floor hallway. This was getting ridiculous. He banged on the door marked SUPERINTENDENT.

“Who is it?” a raspy male voice said from the other side.

“Alan Miles. 2B. Have you smelled the shit out in the lobby? Don’t you think it’s time to do your job and clean it up?”

The sound of a chain rattled against the door and a small crack opened up in the doorway. The sweaty partial face of a middle aged man looked out at him. “Yeah..uh, sorry. I’ve been sick. I’ll get to that tomorrow.”

Alan’s anger subsided. “Sure. Whenever. Take care of yourself first.” He backed up from the entrance as the door slammed closed. Alan suddenly wished he had one of those bottles of sani-gel on him.

He walked to the elevator and reached for the UP button, but hesitated. He pulled the sleeve of his jacket down over his hand and pushed the button with a covered knuckle and did the same for the buttons inside. The ride up was quick, or maybe it was because he was lost in thought. So many people suddenly falling sick. Strange rocks landing all over the planet. What the hell was going on?

He opened the door to his apartment, and threw his keys down on the small table. “Hey babe, I’m home.” There was a pile of letters sitting neatly next to his keys. Alan picked them up and rummaged through them as he walked into the livingroom. “I’m going to take a quick shower before we head out to my brother’s.”

No answer.

“Babe?” He took a quick glance around the room. He could see just about the whole place from this spot. Except the bedroom. The apartment was too quiet. “Babe, you here?”

He hurried into their bedroom. Several drawers were open and their clothing content was removed.

“What the hell?”

A sheet of paper was taped to the mirror of the dresser.

Alan. My parent’s neighbours called me at work. Mom and Dad got sick and fell                             into a coma. I’m taking the first train to Ottawa. Call you when I get there.   

 

Alan lowered the note. “Shit.”

 

***

 

Marcus tugged on the pull-tab of his beer relaxed into the patio chair. It was the first chance in a few days he’d been able to just sit and relax. A part of him told him to enjoy it. He might not get another chance like this for a while.

“What time did Alan say he and Melissa were going to be here?” Louise asked, stepping out onto the back porch.

“Around seven.”

She nodded and walked over to the bar-be-que. “Did you want to cook, or should I?”

“No, I’ll do it.”

“Are you sure? I don’t mind? You’ve worked a lot of long hours and—”

Marcus smiled. “Really, I don’t mind doing the Bar-be-que tonight.”

She smiled and walked over to him. “I’m just glad you’re home.” She made herself comfortable in his lap. “I understand they need you on the base, but these extra shifts with you away is hard.” She bend her head down and gently kissed him on the lips.

“Yeah, but it makes the time we spend together so much better.”

He reached to tickle her around the waist and she slapped his hand away. He grabbed her and brought her closer to him, wrapping his arms around her waist as he kissed her deeply.

Alan’s voice was low. “Uh..I’m not intruding, am I?”

Louise pulled away from Marcus and quickly stood. “Yes, but that’s beside the point.”

Marcus frowned. “I thought you weren’t showing up until seven? And where’s Melissa?”

Alan stepped up to the porch. “Yeah, she had an emergency. Had to go to Ottawa.”

“I hope everything is all right.” Louise said.

“Yeah, just her parents. She’ll be back in a couple days.”

“Well we’ll have another bar-be-que when she gets back.” Louise tapped Marcus on the shoulder. “I go get the meat and you can start.”

Marcus nodded as Alan sat down at the glass patio table. “You wanna a beer?”

“Yeah, sure.”

Marcus stood.

“Wait. Sit down.”

“What’s wrong.”

“Just hang on a minute.”

Marcus sat back down. “Is something wrong with Melissa?”

Alan shook his head. “No, but remember we were talking about this illness?”

“Yeah. What about it?”

“New symptom.”

A sense of dread washed over Marcus. “What?”

“Coma. I talked to Melissa before I came over. Her parents were fine, healthy as a horse up until four days ago. Then they both came down with flu-like symptoms.”

Marcus narrowed his eyes. “Flu-like?”

“That’s what she said the doctors are calling it. It starts off like a cold or flu, then rapidly gets worse. She said that a lot of the cases they have in the hospitals up in Ottawa are falling into comas.”

Marcus stood. He wasn’t sure why, but sitting wasn’t something he wanted to do. “Why haven’t we heard anything on the news?”

“Maybe to keep people from panicking?”

He walked into the house and over to the fridge. This wasn’t right. He wasn’t a doctor or anything, but Davy had been sick enough times that he knew the chain of symptoms didn’t sound right. Worse, it didn’t feel right.

Alan followed him inside, but stayed by the back door. “We need to tell someone about this.”

Marcus faced him. “I have a feeling people already do.”

Louise came out into the kitchen. “You guys have to see this.”

They followed her into the living room and stood beside the couch. The television was on and tuned to CBC.

Louise reached over and took her husband’s hand. “The said the President was going to address the nation.”

Alan sat down on the couch. “What about?”

Louise shook her head.

Marcus held his breath as the image of the President of the United States appeared on the screen. He didn’t hear all the speech, but what he did was eloquent and said with heart-felt emotion.  As the last few words were spoken, Marcus knew this would be the start to something never seen before in human history. On this day a new word would be added to the lexicon of popular words;

‘Un-natural Pandemic’.

 

The Carriers; Part Five

© 2013 Dark Conteur Collection of Works

Author Interview with E.B. Black

It is the middle of May, and once again I bring you another interview with a wonderful author. Maybe it’s the whole ‘spring romance’ thing, but my guest today writes romance. I see a trend beginning, but then romance is just that popular.

So let’s begin…

 

author1. Let’s get to know you a bit. Where are you from, and what genre do you write?

I’m a mountain girl. I moved to the mountains when I was young and still live there now.

Growing up around trees and snow, it’s no wonder that I love writing fantasy romance novels. When I walk around through the woods sometimes I feel like I’m in a fantasy setting, going on an adventure.

 

2. With all the risks and uncertainty around publishing, what was it that drew you to a career in writing?

My last two years of high school, I was home schooled. It made learning one of the most exciting things in the world to me. I helped my Mom plan my curriculum, decided what subjects and text books sounded the most interesting to me, and got to go on field trips and activities that I loved. I learned more in those two years of home school than I learned in all my years of public school.

I knew because of that experience that it’s easier to work if you love what you do. I was more likely to be successful in a field that I loved than doing something that I felt like I had to do. I wanted to be a writer so it would be easy to throw my whole heart and energy into my work.

I spent a lot of years of my life reading books on my own rather than doing my homework when I was in public school. I knew I had a passion for the written word and daydreaming.

I also hoped to have a career where I could be there for my family at the same time I was working. Family is extremely important to me.

 

3. What would you say, is the best thing about writing fantasy romance?

Most fantasy stories are about characters fated to save the world or go on an adventure. Most romance stories are about a couple fated to be together. Fantasy Romance combines the two. It allows characters to explore both a relationship and an adventure in an epic way together.

 

4. Is it difficult to keep your stories fresh and interesting?

Fantasy has so many possibilities. Literally, my imagination is the limit. It’s something I love about fantasy, there are so many new worlds and cultures to explore that there’s always something new and exciting to find.

 

5. What things influence your writing? And have you ever written them into a story?

There are two things that inspire my writing. One is other writers. When one of their stories touches me deeply, it usually inspires me as well.

The other things is experiences or feelings I’ve had in life. Also, people I’ve met.

One person who reviewed my novel, Medusa’s Desire, talked about the great sense of injustice in the book. Around the time I wrote it was when my house had burned down and someone I lived with had died, so I was feeling a great sense of injustice about the world at the same time because of that experience and some things I was watching my friends go through as well.

 

6. What books (if any) have influenced you over the years?

A lot of books have influenced me, it’s difficult to choose. The Harry Potter series really ignited my love of fantasy novels, though. And the Twilight series taught me that you can have both romance and fantasy/paranormal elements in a book and it still work.

 

7. Let’s talk a little about your latest project. What was the inspiration (if any) behind this story?

I’m working on a lot of things right now. One story I am working on, I created based on a picture I saw on Facebook about how a bunch of women would like to read a story where the main character fell in love with them. I decided I’d give it a try.

 

8. Most writers have manuscripts that will never see the light of day. Do you have a few of those or will they eventually come out? 

I have several of those. I know they will never come to light because I deleted them off of my computer. They were more practices for me. I became a better writer through them and learned a lot about what it takes to write a fantasy novel.

 

9. If you were given the opportunity to write a fan-fiction novel, who is the author you would choose, and what would be the book?

I would write Harry Potter fan-fiction from J.K. Rowling. I’d love to get to know that world even more and I’d love to find out what happens to the children of all the main characters. I imagine they go on their own adventure as well.

 

10. What advice would you give to a new author who wants to write?

Sit down and write everyday. Being a writer is about making the time regularly to write. You’ll get better automatically through practice, so don’t sweat it if you’re writing isn’t perfect.

 

To learn more about this month’s author, please click the links below.

Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/ebblackauthor

Blog: http://deathauthor.blogspot.com/

Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/writerblack

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6586070.E_B_Black

Main web-site: http://www.ebblack.com/

 

Links to Pandora’s Mistake:

pandoraAmazon: http://www.amazon.com/Pandoras-Mistake-Fate-Series-ebook/dp/B00BRQINMI/

Barnes and Noble: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/pandoras-mistake-eb-black/1114843842?ean=2940044370661

Itunes: https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/pandoras-mistake-fate-eros/id619965854?mt=11

Smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/293935

Sympathy for the Demon is here!

Just a quick blog post. SYMPATHY FOR THE DEMON is now available in just about all major online ebook retailers! Links for Barns and Noble will be up in the next couple of days. YaY! Now I can move on to writing book 5!

http://darkeconteur.wordpress.com/new-releases/

Mystical Wednesday; Scrying

For centuries, people have been fascinated with learning what the future will hold. Wealth, happiness, good fortune of any kind, drove people to seek out ways to learn what the universe had in store for them. From this, several forms of divination arose, and most if not all, are still quite popular today.

Scrying is when you can gaze into crystals, stones, glass, mirrors, water, fire, or smoke, hoping to evoke some image of the past, present, or future. While the name itself invokes images of mystical dark nights chanting under a full moon, there is more to it than it appears. It is thought that by gazing into a reflective, translucent, or luminescent substances, the conscience side of the brain ‘shuts off’, allowing for the unconscious to dominate as it does while we’re sleeping. In this state, many believe we can tap into our psychic abilities.

I have done scrying during a full moon, but my mind races so much that it was hard to really fall into any sort of trance. I took a piece of silver (a coin), placed it in a bowl with water and held it up so the water reflected the moon. I tried to position the moon’s reflection directly over the coin, but everything was at such an awkward angle that it didn’t work.

I have thought about trying it again. Maybe this summer. What about you? Have you ever been curious enough to try it?  

Special Announcement!

Okay! I can’t keep it a secret any more! Get your ereaders/Kindles ready! SYMPATHY FOR THE DEMON will be live (hopefully) on all distribution channels as of this Friday! I plan a combo book for OF COVENS AND PACKS and SYMPATHY FOR THE DEMON to come out later this summer.

demon (web)

The demon within Pele volcano forewarned Jezryall about the coming maelstrom, but it may have been in vain.

Trapped in Hell, Barb Dole discovers the plan is already in motion. When unleashed, it will bring destruction on a Biblical scale, but doubts surround her co-worker’s capability to fight this threat, especially when Martin Cunningham’s position within the group is finally revealed.

Undermined by fear, their only saving grace may be time as they summon an ancient deity whose allegiance toward the Human race is questionable. With an unexpected ally residing in Hell, Jezryall and her team may have the advantage, but for how long?

Enjoy this excerpt from the book!

http://darkeconteur.wordpress.com/2013/04/08/excerpt-from-sympathy-for-the-demon/

What’s that? I can’t hear your story; too much filtering.

What is filtering? I consider it a form of ‘telling’; when you tell the reader what the character saw. It’s most prevalent in first and tight third person P.O.V’s and a very common mistake among new writers.

Example:

She saw the bird fly past and watched as it landed in a nearby tree.

Take out the filtering and you have this:

The bird flew past and landed in a nearby tree.

The reason it’s annoying is because the reader is already immersed in the character’s POV, and stating that said character is ‘looking’ or ‘hearing’ or what have you, is pointing out the obvious. We now she saw the bird and would watch it, because we’re it’s already established that we’re seeing the world through the character’s eyes.

The first time this was pointed out to me, I was stunned. I’d never heard of it before, and I’d been writing this way for a while. For my critique partner to tell me that I was filtering was new and very unexpected.  More importantly, why had no one else mentioned this to me before? I felt so stupid. Here I was, beating readers over the head with obvious prose.  I try to watch it now, but I’m sure some slip by. *NOTE* Must tell beta to be on the lookout for future filtering*

Something else about removing this process from your work; it tightens up the prose nicely. It allows for a better description of what is going on.

Example:

With but a whisper of sound, the bird flew past and landed in a nearby tree; its colourful feathers a stark contrast to the green of the leaves.

One of the biggest and most often problems new writers have is a large word count. If you’re attempting Trad. Publishing, and have a high word count, you might want to go through your manuscript and check for filtering. Omitting the obvious could help you out.

Here are some other links with more examples.

http://callejbrookes.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/8829356-filtering-in-fiction

http://writerleigh.blogspot.ca/2009/12/filtering.html

What about you? Did you filter? What was your reaction when someone told you? 

Who’s Your WIP; Lori Sjoberg

[I swear I thought April had 31 days]

Ah April, spring time when a man’s fancy turns to love. I’ve been in a romantic mood lately as both my guest posters write romance. Definitely something in the air. This month’s excerpt comes from GRAVE DESTINATIONS, book two of Lori Sjoberg’s paranormal romance series GRAVE, published by Kensington around December 2010/January 2014. Enjoy!

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Jack  Deverall leaned against the starboard rail, watching the ship’s slow departure from Port Canaveral. He felt a faint shudder as the boat picked up speed, cruising between two tiny tugboats on its way out to sea. On the top deck, the pulsing beat of samba music blared from the speakers as passengers celebrated the beginning of a seven-night Caribbean adventure. A few minutes later, the deep bellow of the ship’s horn cut through the air, eliciting a chorus of raucous cheers from the crowd.

He could have booked a flight to his destination, could have been there and back in the time it would take the ship to reach the tiny island of St. Angelique. But part of him was in no hurry, preferring to extend the trip and delay his inevitable disappointment.

He hoped this time would prove different from all the others, he really did. But continual failure made it difficult to fight his growing cynicism. For years he’d traveled the globe, consulting with every mystic, psychic, seer and shaman he could locate. All promised. None delivered. With that kind of batting record, it was getting harder to remain optimistic.

So no, he was in no hurry to hammer another nail in the coffin of his hopes and dreams.

He pulled his wallet from the back pocket of his jeans, thumbing through the billfold until he found the small scrap of paper, the crease folded and unfolded so many times it had almost worn a hole. In spite of his doubts, he prayed Madam Cassandra was right about the abilities of Jolie Duquette. He’d give Ms. Duquette damn near anything to break the curse that had plagued him for more years than he cared to count.

For better or for worse, he’d have his answer in three days’ time.

In the meantime, he had nothing to do but relax and enjoy the scenery. With over four thousand passengers and crew on board, the Sunshine of the Caribbean was a floating city devoted to the fine art of decadence. Alcohol flowed like water while inhibitions were nonexistent, a Sodom & Gomorrah of the high seas.

A stunning young blonde in a pair of short shorts and a purple bikini top sauntered past, a drink in one hand and a cell phone pressed against her ear. She was pretty, in a drunken party girl kind of way, young and brazen with an air of self-assurance that couldn’t be faked. She eyed Jack with open interest as she sipped her Mai Tai, giving him an inviting smile as she headed toward the shallow end of the pool.

He sensed her attraction, could feel the warm blast of sensuality from twenty feet away, curling around him like a lover’s embrace.

His darker nature noticed it, too. Jack felt it stir inside, urging him to take advantage of the situation, to seize the opportunity and feed its insatiable hunger for raw, unbridled lust.

“No,” he murmured through clenched teeth, pushing back against the powerful rush of desire pulsing through his body. Gripping the rail, he closed his eyes and took deep breaths until the craving cooled from a boil to a simmer, under control but still lurking beneath the surface.

Watching. Waiting.

A little over a week had passed since he’d last given in to the curse. He needed to feed it soon or risk losing control. Again. That simply wasn’t an option. The last time it happened he’d gone on an all-night bender, slaking his lust like a junkie on a binge. He’d been powerless to stop it, watching himself behave like an animal but unable to curb his own actions. In the end he’d felt cheap, and dirty, and somewhere lower than human.

Over the years, he’d gotten much better at controlling the cravings. It was a difficult juggling act, maintaining the proper balance to keep the beast at bay. Too little and it became ravenous and unpredictable. Too much and it grew stronger than he could handle. It was a fine line to tread, a narrowly defined path offering little margin for error.

On deck, the music changed to a bass-heavy techno beat. The blonde gave him one final lingering look before turning her attention to a tall, lanky brunette in neon orange board shorts and a tank top with Official Bikini Inspector scrawled across the chest.

Easy come easy go.

“She was too young for you anyway.”

Jack’s gaze cut to the right, to the gorgeous redhead standing a few feet away. Slender yet curvy, she was leaning against the rail with her back to the ocean, holding one of those frozen girly drinks with a chunk of pineapple jammed against the rim. Her face held an expression of amusement, over what he didn’t know.

“Excuse me?”

“You heard me,” she said, a sly smile curving lush crimson lips. There was a distinct southern drawl to her voice, a sultry purr that fired his imagination. “I’d be surprised if that girl’s old enough to drive. You should be ashamed of yourself, robbing the cradle like that.”

“I didn’t–” Jack paused to give the redhead a long appraising look. She was tall for a woman, loose-limbed and long-legged with the kind of soft, feminine features that made a man want to settle in for a good, long while. Her pale skin led him to believe that red was indeed her natural hair color. Throw in the high cheekbones and vibrant green eyes, and she made one hell of a package.

“Settle down, I was only kidding.” The redhead chuckled under her breath, a rich throaty sound that warmed his blood and stirred the curse. She held her hand out to him. “The name’s Ruby. Pleasure to make your acquaintance.”

Her skin felt warm and soft, her grip firm and confident.

“Pleasure’s all mine. I’m Jack.” He held her hand a little longer than necessary and sensed an undeniable flare of attraction on Ruby’s behalf. Attraction, and something else he couldn’t quite identify.

“Is this your first cruise?” she asked, her fingers absently toying with the delicate pink choker fastened around her neck.

“No, but it’s been a while. You?”

“First time for me.” And she didn’t look exactly thrilled about it, which might explain why her back faced the water. She sipped her drink, her lipstick leaving a dark red ring around the straw. “I’m not real big on boats.”

Definitely not the response he expected. “Then why did you go on a cruise?”

“Boss booked it for me,” she said by way of explanation, her southern accent laced with irritation. She took a long pull from her drink, leaving the glass close to empty. Then the smile returned, brilliant and with a dash of sensuality he damn near felt in his gut. “You know how it is. It’s not wise to say no to the boss.”

“Understandable.” He paused while a trio of older women walked by, huddled close and giggling like teenagers. “So what kind of work do you do?”

“Oh, this and that,” she said with a casual wave of her hand. The ocean breeze kicked up, wreaking havoc on her long, auburn hair. She reached up, tucking the loose strands behind her ears. “Mainly, I’m a collector.”

“Collector of what?”

Ruby chuckled again, another one of those rich, throaty laughs that made his imagination run wild and had the curse chomping at the bit. It was both fascinating and disturbing, how easily she managed to shake his equilibrium. He inhaled a deep breath, forcing his darker half to play nice.

“Let’s save that subject for another day.” Finished with her drink, she set the empty glass on a nearby table. Then her eyes locked with his, bright with the kind of mischief that got a man into serious trouble. “A girl’s got to keep some secrets, doesn’t she?” She pushed away from the rail. “I’ll let you go back to checking out all the pretty girls. See you around, Jack.”

He watched while she took a leisurely stroll across the deck, appreciating the rear view almost as much as he’d enjoyed the front. Hips swinging, she drew the attention of every red-blooded heterosexual man she passed, a fact that left him unexpectedly annoyed. She stopped at the poolside bar for another drink, then glanced over her shoulder and gave him a smile and a finger wave before disappearing through the sliding glass doors leading to the lower decks.

It took him a few minutes to get his brain back in proper working order, to calm his baser urges so he could function like a civilized human being. Only then did he realize something strange and unsettling.

Ruby wasn’t human

~~~~~

OLYMPUS DIGITAL CAMERAGrowing up the youngest of three girls, Lori never had control of the remote. (Not that she’s bitter about that. Really. Okay, maybe a little, but it’s not like she’s scarred for life or anything.) That meant a steady diet of science fiction and fantasy. Star Trek, Star Wars, Twilight Zone, Outer Limits – you name it, she watched it. It fed her imagination, and that came in handy when the hormones kicked in and she needed a creative excuse for being out past curfew.

After completing her first manuscript, she joined the Romance Writers of America and Central Florida Romance Writers. Now she exercises the analytical half of her brain at work, and the creative half writing paranormal romance. When she’s not doing either one of those, she’s usually spending time with her husband and children of the four-legged variety.

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Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6574214.Lori_Sjoberg

Twitter: @Lori_Sjoberg

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